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Siento means sorry. And he hasn't walked 120 miles lol, he aims to reach Querto but passes through a town called Ibarra and that's where I left it off. Also ...

The first paragraph is awesome, it really drew me in. I agree with the comment above on how I wasn't sure what was going on in the beginning though. Maybe ...

How old is the narrator supposed to be? Because in reality I don't think a young child would talk like this, but if she is older than that would make ...

I like how it starts in medias res, it grabs the reader. Good job, in this going to be a continuation?