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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Politics Re: Deception - Chapter One - Words Betray

    Thank you so much for this and I promise you I'm currently working on a revision which coincidentally sticks up to your advice. I'm just really sorry I pasted the ...

    Feb 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Politics Re: Deception - Chapter One - Words Betray

    So I've decided that it would involve local government officials instead so that the interaction of the characters would not be as remote as this. What do you think?

    Nov 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Politics Re: Deception - Chapter One - Words Betray

    i'm really sorry I gave you a hard time. I have accidentally copied the whole manuscript. But anyway, thank you for because you really took time for it and gave ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Satire, Spiritual Re: Fly in the Ointment (Part 2: The Fall of Kathryn and What Megan Thought As She Watched It Happen)

    hi this is lawrence from Part 1 review. this is what I'm talking about. You should have coalesced this part and the first one so that it would be more ...

    Nov 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: To Write a Poem | Unedited

    Resonating what felistia had written, I couldn't agree more. At the span of my passion in writing I have written only one single poem and it was about my grandmother ...

    Oct 30, 2015


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