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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Everything Inside

    This piece is really great actually! Your opening stanza works well together, but for constructive criticism purposes, you begin to speak to this outside entity that is causing all the ...

    Feb 12, 2016


I am proud of my self, the reason why some of you might disagree with me a little with, but nevertheless I still proud.
— Oxara