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Re: Reasons why I love Johnny;
Define: cute. Couldn't you be a little bit more descriptive don't you reckon? number one reason that i love him is because when i lie awake at night i match ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Fluorescence
I just want to read more and more and more to be honest with you! Please continue this piece! I was captured by your title Fluorescence as it is very ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Jump
I know that it says romantic short stories; that was very short! He was perfect, I was not. That has got to be my favourite sentence because it is so ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Love lies . (Please review) (:
Next time use paragraphs. I know that you made mistakes and your grammar was awful. However, I can see how much you wanted to do well. I am sure that ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: a little dream in abstract
This poem is very engaging! I love how abstract it actually is. I thought from the title that it might be a little cliche and therefore, dull. However, I was ...
Dec 6, 2010
