laughingfreakx3

I would have to say gymnastics! Nastia Lukin and Shawn Johnson are mad skilled!! I con only wish to be as good as them!

Be independent don't sit there, cooped up in a shell your actions affect everyone around you and you act so confused You tell me lies and don't comment to your ...

That was a very cool poem. It was really creative too! But you need to go back and edit your spelling, if you haven't looked at the other reviews yet. ...

Its was good Linds! Its was definitely shorter that your usual but that's OK! I think you could add more to it and it could be really good! Maybe you ...

Bravo! That's was really good! In the beginning I was thinking, why did you name the poem once? Then I read on and it all fit together. You had great ...

If you can give me ideas of a poem please reply. Just something to write about

hmmm.....I liked this one. In the first few verses it was kind of choppy and didn't seem right. But the rest flowed really well. It was a well written poem, ...

That was an awesome poem. That's very kind of you to think of your neighbor in that way. I am sorry to hear that too. bravo on the poem @('_')@

The party goes on there's a full club just having fun things sore through the air suddenly, your muscles freeze when you hear glass shatter the is music obnoxiously loud ...

When I was four years old I was a typical little girl. I played with dolls, had tea parties and hugged and kissed my mommy and daddy. But the problem ...

Your poem is not my favorite but it is good You could add more and it could be good

I was great! I didn't blow me away but I went up just a bit Keep doing what your doing

Bravo! You showed and didn't tell the whole poem You described the ship so well and it drew a perfect pic in my mind I was awesome!!!!!!!!! I was also ...

WONDERFUL [quote] Now I sit, within these walls Until the day of departure calls. That was a great line in the poem and my favorite

You need more describing in it show don't tell You need more power to it I know you could fix it and I could be a great poem