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larnise

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: I haven't decided on a title. Sorry.

    I like it. There are a few spots where you forgot some punctuation marks, but that should be easy enough to fix. I really like the story line you created, ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: White Granite

    I'm rendered speechless by this wonderful writing.

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Shadows

    It is very good. There were a few typos, so look back over it. I loved it and can't wait for the next chapter.

    Nov 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Treehouse

    Hey, thanks IamHathor22. I'll change it now.

    Nov 2, 2011


A true poet does not bother to be poetical. Nor does a nursery gardener scent his roses.
— Jean Cocteau