larnise

I look up foreign words for things, then sort of twist them so they sound like names. Example: I have a character named Dunama, which is a twist of the ...

I like it. There are a few spots where you forgot some punctuation marks, but that should be easy enough to fix. I really like the story line you created, ...

I'm sorry, but it's so long, I didn't read all of it. I stopped when you said that Anne Bradstreet was the first known female author. That's not true. I ...

I'm rendered speechless by this wonderful writing.

It could use a little more detail, but there is potential. :D

It is very good. There were a few typos, so look back over it. I loved it and can't wait for the next chapter.

Sometimes, you need comfort. Sometimes you need to be alone. When someone special dies, you don't know what you need. Sometimes, you feel like you need both at once. Now, ...

This is very good, I'm impressed. It's very to the point, and yet gives a lot of detail as to what's going on in her life. You're a very good ...

Interesting, I would love to read the rest of it, if there is more. It's a very good storyline, and the wording of the characters is magnificent. Keep up the ...

Hey, I think that you actually hit the dot on that one. The world really is like that. I did not see any grammar problems or spelling problems. However, it ...

Hey, thanks IamHathor22. I'll change it now.

Deep in the forest, there is a tree house. And in this tree house are fairies. And in this tree house are elves. And this is our favorite place, to ...