lanseloot

Great beginning! And ending - i like how there is a note of something foul, sort of like a passive aggressive comment in the last sentence. I don't have much ...

Thank you so much, this means a lot to me since i wasn't very confident in my work. I'll try to fix those grammar mistakes and also do a research ...

Thank you soooo much for your review. I'm glad you think this is good and i'll try to fix and polish my work. For the 'murdering i baby' part, i ...

Thank you soooo much for your review. I'm glad you think this is good and i'll try to fix and polish my work. For the 'murdering i baby' part, i ...