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A very sad poem, but anything that involves reality is sad. Do you see her as she is? A bleeding heart, laughing to hide the pain. That she’s tired of ...

A very good poem indeed!!!! great descriptive, shows that you care about our world and what we have done to it. relating to the fact of real events, proves handy ...

it was a very good poem, i thought anyhow, very descriptive and such. it showed creativeness and gave a good image of what you were explaining. good work =D

Very good, liked the formating

i quite liked this poem, and thought it was very well said, great description, how evil she is.

As the brave, i march up to the front, side by side, the brave march up to the front, for those of the coward, fight alone, next to none, but ...