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Hi kingolions, The Imagery was great and very descriptive, allowing the reading to see what you were meaning. Couldn't find any errors in your poem, in general it was good ...

Hey there, I really liked this poem, been reading a few and this is my top fav right now! Good job! The length of the poem was good, the imagery ...

Here i lie again in this dark night the shadows my only friend heart broker here i lie again alone in this night the shadows move and spin the lies ...

Hi Solvalery, Again another great poem! Not to into the religion issue, but i understood the meaning. =D Cant wait to see more!

Hi SilentRain, Your poem, showed alot of passion and love for you sister, i have nothing bad to say about your poem. keep up the good work.=P

Hi asweeney1919, not to shabby of a poem, i gotta say, it has some very sad meaning with it. Not to criticize but i recommend on capping at the start ...

Hi there GummyBearEater, I quite enjoyed your poem, gets very deep into the essence, of time. "Endings will not make it end,Death would never make it bend, Unhappy thoughts would ...

thank you for the comment, I understand what you are trying to say. The reason why you may be confused with "Zooming by, knowing there is a wish." Is that ...

A very good poem indeed! my favorite part of the poem was "Inside I feel danger and my eyes want to cry Because of a stranger" even though you write ...

Hi there, I quite like your poem, and formatting, it really tells a good story, of love. I can relate to this and I enjoyed reading this.

Hi niccinic, sorry if it disappointed you, but to answer your questions, the lost night, even in the day the body of emotions can make it feel as your lost ...

The lost night, in the moment, the warm sunny day, twists away Got to surrender, drop down To fly above, in the night Zooming by, knowing there is a wish ...

Hi there, The poem was sad, but brought a upon detail, of the experience you are having, making it a good poem to express your feeling out. "Lying in the ...

Hi there, i quite enjoyed this poem, with its creativity, its imagery, and the reality of what the enjoyment of a campfire can do to one and another. "Laughter and ...

Hi there, it was a good poem, layed out nicely, allowing the pauses to create the image you are giving. every line had a general image in how you see ...