lamchux

This was another amazing chapter! I like how you got your characters to show how friendly they are with each other. I also liked how you portrayed Benny's kindness towards ...

This is breathtaking. The descriptions you use are amazing. From the moment i started reading i couldn't look away from the screen. I am so intrigued by this story and ...

This is awesome. :) this chapter did not have the confusing sections of dialogue which was great. Unfortunately, you had some spelling mistakes in there. You had diagonal spelt as ...

This is so cool! i got right into the story from the start and my mind was blown. The action was intense and the descriptions amazing. I really connected with ...

This is amazing! It has a great hook that really got me interested.The characters are very interesting and the interactions are really well done. Though i would say that with ...