lalarawrmonster

Thanks Ita! I had a lot of doubts about my prologue and your input is exactly what I needed to hear/read. Thanks for being specific too. I've been trying to ...

Very different from how most poems are written, but that isn't a bad thing. Kind of sounds like a funny camp song. Reading this brought a smile to my face, ...

Kind of like a song. Has a good flow. And a good theme. Very different from the way most people think too. Altogether, I like it. Sad, honest, and deep. ...