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Hey! Thanks for the review :) I had actually forgotten about the hook-ups/fucks, I was trying to decide between the two but hook-ups does sound more natural. A few of ...

I think that's a good plan!

Thanks again for the amazing review! I'd like your opinion on something, do you think it would mess up the flow if I added in Bridget, Brooke & April dancing ...

People please review this!

Hey! Thanks so much for the review :) I find the stuff you pointed out to be very helpful! They're the things I don't really pay attention to lol. I ...

Thank-you but this isn't a poem... It's the second chapter of a novel.

Hey everyone! Here's the link for my second chapter :) -Nicole

Hey! Thanks for the review :) I actually did neglect to put May's age in (she's a sophomore) but I have it added now. I also changed the part about ...

Thank-you so, so, so, much! I needed this. I honestly thought it wasn't getting reviews because peopled hated it :( I'm almost done polishing chapter 2 :) I'll send you ...

People please review! I need feedback

I didn't mean for my comment to be hurtful, it was just positive advice that can help make your writing better! Your writing is already really good but everyone just ...

Thank-you so much! This means a lot

That is actually the biggest compliment I have ever received. I could literally cry right now I'm so happy. Thank-you, thank-you, thank-you!

Thank you guys so much for the comments! This was a piece I actually wrote for a contest & I had a word limit so that's why some of the ...

Thank you guys so much for the comments! This was a piece I actually wrote for a contest & I had a word limit so that's why some of the ...