lakegirls

Yes I did, and i know, lol, i'm trying to change her a bit. I really don't want her to come off as either one of those. Any suggestions on ...

Please write reviews for this, i really need to know what people think, so i will know if i should keep going or if i should just stop.! :D

I really liked this poem, it reminded me of Fawkes in Harry Potter! Keep up the good work! :D

Hey, Thank-you so much for your pointers, I have already fixed them :) I think the part where Justin scolded Bridget I might leave in his name because if I ...

Okay, well that didn't really make sense to me, what was it?