lakegirl

It's not an eleven year old. "You cradled me in your arms for eleven years" thats just how many years the world protected the girl.

Your voice is like the mist we are so used to feeling, soft on our faces. Your voice is like the sunlight we are so used to having brighten our ...

Kaedee: Thanks for the review! Actually, when I put it in I thought that that line would be awful because no one would understand it, but I put it in ...

SpokenWordTeej: Thanks for the review! I tried to make this a poem with something that everyone could relate to in some way. I can relate to my poem entirely (except ...

Yeah. No suicide just seems so awful...

Mr.Knightley: Oh no, I definitely would never commit suicide. Lots of it are true feelings though. Thanks for the review! I appreciate it.

this poem is brutally honest. it makes the reader feel ashamed and guilty for not being able to help this narrator. it makes the reader want to call/text there friends ...

JustisMarez: The plastic into gold part meant that it made unimportant things more important. Thanks for the review!

Quiet waters, and the bridge over pale light masks the dusky road. I love the way your poem begins. It sets a scene in my mind. I would like to ...

Dear World, you cradled me in your arms for 11 years, never warning me of the troubles you would give me. Dear Heart, you beat for the wrong people. You ...

Thanks!

Hi! So this is a poem I wrote when I was thinking about things like beauty, people, and definitions, and how we know what something is but we cannot define ...

Thanks! I'll try to take all of your suggestions and edit it later.

Hi! Okay so the poem was about a girl who was "alone" and lost but she needed others around her. and I know that there were short lines, I did ...

She needs the sound of footsteps and voices and laughter just like she needs to breathe, because the darkness will swallow her whole. She is all alone but amongst the ...