ladymay

A great poem! I liked the use of metaphors and similes. It was very descriptive. Living in the bush, I agree wholeheartedly with the comparison of cities being like sores. ...

What an excellent story! I like how you switched between the two characters so quickly. It was a bit confusing at first, but when I got used to it, it ...

“But I didn’t do it!” Moira is whining. Gosh, I feel so sorry for her. “It wasn’t me ! I swear ! Even ask her, even ask the old hag! ...

Oh, wow. This poem is so, so very sad and touching. I love the language you used. You really managed to capture the feeling. I almost felt as though I ...

Loneliness is the caw of a single crow The rustle of leaves The cobwebs in the corner And if you listen, all you hear is the wind And the happiness ...

How touching! You really managed to capture the feeling with this piece. You've always been great at haiku. :)

Fantastic! An excellent summary of Harry's personality. :)

Oh my gosh! What a great poem! I loved the rhythm and the structure. I also loved the metaphor - I can think of a million things that I could ...