-
Re: City
A great poem! I liked the use of metaphors and similes. It was very descriptive. Living in the bush, I agree wholeheartedly with the comparison of cities being like sores. ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Just Do It
What an excellent story! I like how you switched between the two characters so quickly. It was a bit confusing at first, but when I got used to it, it ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Moira's Predicament
“But I didn’t do it!” Moira is whining. Gosh, I feel so sorry for her. “It wasn’t me ! I swear ! Even ask her, even ask the old hag! ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: My Horse
Oh, wow. This poem is so, so very sad and touching. I love the language you used. You really managed to capture the feeling. I almost felt as though I ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Loneliness
Loneliness is the caw of a single crow The rustle of leaves The cobwebs in the corner And if you listen, all you hear is the wind And the happiness ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Haiku
How touching! You really managed to capture the feeling with this piece. You've always been great at haiku. :)
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter Rapping Battle
Fantastic! An excellent summary of Harry's personality. :)
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Trouble Came to the Turnip
Oh my gosh! What a great poem! I loved the rhythm and the structure. I also loved the metaphor - I can think of a million things that I could ...
Sep 28, 2011