ladymask

If you review my work I will give you a hundred thousand spider eyes wrapped in a pretty red box with a pretty purple ribbon sitting pretty under an electrocuted ...

Sydney! Hello there! Your arrival has launched me out of inactivity. (Also, I love your username.) (My name is Haley and I like tea and masks and drawing.)

I'm going to have to disagree with the reviews above, actually. First, punctuation and form in a poem should always be optional -- entirely up to the poet, and used ...

Thank you everyone :) It's condensed because it was for a personal flash fiction challenge, which is probably why it has the tone it has. But I'd very much like ...

You have a very interesting metaphor going on here, with the fish, and I like how that single line titles the entire poem. Some of your other lines ("grow like ...

thank you for reading :) ******************** As Edwin saw it, the old manor had an air not unlike his grandfather: stuffy and pompous to keep up appearances, but with a ...

Thanks very much, both of you!

Thanks very much! Essentially what has happened is this man, the main character, is a criminal who the government is analyzing through new induced-amnesia techniques. They're setting him up with ...

I don't write short stories as often as I'd like, but I'm somewhat proud of this one, so I'm posting it. Thanks for reading :D Rated 12+ for mild language. ...

Nice work on a form of poetry that's fairly unused nowadays :) Just one or two things. I like the rhyme scale here, but have you considered switching it up ...

Thank you ma'am! The un-capitalization is intentional, actually :) I know it bothers some people, but for me, certain pieces just don't work without it. I'm strange like that ;)

I LOVE the second and sixth photos. There's something about the angles, the details -- like the water droplets and the stormy tension of the clouds in the sixth -- ...

Haha. We did Annie my junior year of high school, so it's sometimes on repeat in my head.

Thanks so much for your feedback! I really appreciate it. This piece is very personal to me, so thank you for taking the time to read and review it! :D

Rachael has already commented on a lot of what I noticed, so I won't restate. But first, let me say I enjoyed this very much and that you have a ...