ladymask

I love the perspective in the first one! *dies* You also have a pretty good grasp on musculature. Nice job :)

Thanks, both of you! :D NixonBlitzen: the dangling 's' was meant to convey a sort of break in thought, like "you cut open a rabbit..." was the main point, and ...

9/10 Preeeeetty and colorful. :D

I found this adorable. It has this sweet innocence to it, and a very nostalgic but clear look through a child's eyes. No real critique, unfortunately, but I really enjoyed ...

Thank you for reading :D (P.S. Non-capitalization is indeed intentional :)) ********* i spend too much eyesight nowadays staring at the fluorescent glare the ceiling-light leaves on my puke-green-whit

Firstly, this is lovely. :D Your images are brilliant, and perfectly portray that slipping, sliding, melting feeling which is given solidity by the cement and wax metaphors. I haven't said ...

(That cat-frog might be the most disarmingly appealing gift for her on this thread, I think :D)

Hehe. This is very cute :D Pencil personification -- very cool. The rhyme flows pretty naturally and the different images and parallels -- Israel's and France's greetings, for instance -- ...

You have a strong grasp on theme here, and the images you use are also very strong. However, I'd suggest using a bit more. Poetry is, of course, extremely subjective ...

I found this beautiful. I couldn't say exactly why, it's hard to pinpoint that in a poem sometimes, but I really did. I'd love to see it in a bit ...

I just want to say, you are a freaking superhero. :D

Thank you so very much for the comment! :D Just to clarify, Tyler didn't have much motivation for the road trip, aside from that Rick is his best friend, and ...

This is an expansion of a flash fiction I wrote awhile ago. It's only a first/second draft (depending on whether you think the flash was a first draft) so I'd ...

....rain check on that? :D

I'm hopping into the thievery! (edit) ....except that I've clearly killed it, which makes me a massive failure as a hijacker. Not even time for a ransom.