ladcat13

I actually have written a lot more than this, and omg u nailed it! the baby dragon isn't a slave, but her rider... you'll see. I already had the first ...

I think I will, just to see if the same opinion is given to the actual chapters. I'm surprised to hear that there are too many adjectives. I thought I ...

Thanks for the generous rating. Its still a work in progress, I know, but the only thing I disagree with you on is her name. The purpose of not giving ...

Hey, read my first story on this website, Maelstrom. Give me a reveiw on it. Its not a poem and it may not be the genre u like, but try ...

This poem has a great rythm, which I appreciate in free verse. The lack of ryhm scheme somwtimes makes authors write paragraphs in stanza format, which isnt poetry at all. ...

Oh my gosh! That was so exciting! When the father ripped open the door and the gun came into view, my stomach took a plunge. You really hooked me in. ...

Woah. That's deep. I mean, you really nailed it with this poem. I think it's ok that it's free verse. It doesn't have to be very structured to be great ...

Like he said, the imagery is very appropriate. I loved it. The tone of voice was absolutley genius. You know, this could have potential. You might want to consider expanding ...