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Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Endless: Part XI
You have some suspense, action, and plot. All good. My technical suggestion relates to passive voice. You opened with it and so the story begins slow. The first thing I ...
Feb 14, 2014

You may deem me romantic, my dear sister, but I bitterly feel the want of a friend.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein