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kwestion22

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Could

    I enjoyed certain parts of that poem a LOT. "Or slither through my journal And whine like a child" was good imagery. I feel like the last stanza isn't final ...

    Oct 5, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: THE ETERNALLY SAILING SHIP

    Wow, I think this could be a totally awesome poem. The idea of it is great! I get what you're trying to get across, but the thing is, the rhymes ...

    Oct 4, 2005


Cheat your landlord if you can and must, but do not try to shortchange the Muse. It cannot be done. You can’t fake quality any more than you can fake a good meal.
— William S. Burroughs