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kwestion22

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Could

    I enjoyed certain parts of that poem a LOT. "Or slither through my journal And whine like a child" was good imagery. I feel like the last stanza isn't final ...

    Oct 5, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: THE ETERNALLY SAILING SHIP

    Wow, I think this could be a totally awesome poem. The idea of it is great! I get what you're trying to get across, but the thing is, the rhymes ...

    Oct 4, 2005


Depression is messin with the wrong person over here cuz in the months that I was doing better I was sharpening my weapons for this war.
— Kaia