kurosakka

Are you talking about the dark side of love. I feel that your poems are vague and not very cohesive for a series. I think when you edit it have ...

Your story intrigues me I wonder what happened that lead to someone commiting murder. You make wonder what happened. I might even write my own ending to just learn what ...

Your imagery is very strong and I am really engrossed with your character's thoughts. But your ending is ambigous but it is a fitting ending to your story. I hope ...

I enjoyed the story but I would like to say that it's too short. You could expand the story into about five pages. I think you could give us some ...