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Re: Why He Did It
This story was kind of confusing as the backwards in time didn't flow very well. I didn't realize it was going back in time until the very end. However it ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: The Only One: Chapter 1 (Rough Draft)
I really like this, it is very interesting, and it had my attention the entire time. However there were some spelling mistakes that I saw like at one point where ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: .
I like it so far but it seems kind of flat. I understand it is sort of like a blog but I think you should dive more into her powers. ...
Apr 7, 2015