kristennicole

As I walk through this house of shadows; I feel terror in the air. Broken hearts and tortured spirits, Lives filled with despair. I hear them softly calling, Knowing that ...

yes, this poem is pretty amazing. It's just that I don't get the title. I wish I could help you with some names but, ? other than that, this was ...

Thanks everyone, for the great advice! I edited it, and I hope you find this version a little better? I know I did. You're the best. :D

This poem was great, but what really threw me off was the repetance of (not dear to me) if you would've put something else in there besides what you put ...

Apart from the mispelled words and incorrect grammar, this poem was actually very good. It did throw me off a little as I was trying to read it, however, I ...

It all started when you left me, The storm began to churn. My emotions faded, As my soul began to burn. Now as the clouds roll in, I feel so ...

Thanks for the advice. that helped alot(:

Okay, So I'm Like a HUGE romantic. and I have to say, your poem was very good. When people write poetry about love, (especially guys), they don't like to write ...

I really like this. It's good. have you ever thought about publishing?

I see your green eyes, every time I close mine. You make it hard to breathe. Your warmth is like the sunshine, it radiates through me. When I'm around you ...