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I was hoping this day would never come. The day I just must dissect someone's story. On the contrary, to my belief, I am pumped to be doing this, so ...

All I have to say is that I love the way it flows and the story it tells. Though, I believe that you should change the "misoury" to "misery" and ...

That was so cute!! It reminded me of my nephew when he asks me things. He's only two and a half, but he's so demanding. Either way, I can't say ...

It's a great poem and I can see where you are getting with this, but it's agreed that the rhythm just isn't there and that you need to focus more ...

We all know her. That girl. The one who hides her face, even after you've seen her tears. She smiles and jokes, even though her make-up's smeared. She tries her ...

Wow. That's all that's going through my mind right now, just wow. The raw emotion and description that you put into this story is almost enough to bring tears to ...

-Chokes- Sorry, I tried to imagine smelling twenty different colognes at once and I nearly lost my poptarts. =) Seriously, though, I love the way you wrote this short story. ...

Hi! I'm just new and I wanted some friends or something I guess. Soooo.....message or post a comment. I guess?... I don't know, I've never used this site before...soo....it's pretty ...