kristachouinard

Hello! I like the story line in this, I really do. One comment I have is that some parts were just too wordy. Maybe you could fix that by shortening ...

A world of fame and fortune, a world of trials and vicory. A world with every happy ending, a world with success and fulfillment. Hi there! I really liked this ...

:o I didn't realize how long that was! Haha, good idea!

Hello  So…as I take this all in, I want you to know that I completely understand what you’re saying and where you’re coming from, however I think you might ...

Squeals echoed throughout the neighborhood. Running along the side of the house was a girl. She was young, her beautiful hair curled with blond, whose only fear in the world ...

Hi there! Well, I think this is a great poem, I'll start by saying that, but of course there is always room for work, granted, I don't think this poem ...

I love writing stories also, and I acually have a few short stories from my creative writing class last year that might make it on this site. I'm not sure ...

Hello! First off, this is the second post/thread of haiku's i've read today, and I think I've been inspired to try some of my own :wink: Yes, that means I ...

Ah, that makes sense :-) Keep up the writing!

Oh! Thanks for pointing out the spelling error, I'll go fix it in a second :) And also,I think I will change it to tarnished, I never thought of using ...

Thank you!

It's probably a popular age for kids to start writing, don't you think? Finally you grow up and silly drama starts (not that silly high school drama is any better ...

Me again! I just wanted to say that if you wanted a better understanding of what I was trying to explain, I just read a poem called "I Am From" ...

I loved this poem! I agree that the organization of the poem might do better in shorter lines like Maki Chan suggested, but even so I feel like I got ...

Hey guys, I was wondering if you could help me. In my poem, there's supposed to be four stanzas. In between the lines, "in our reflections" and "hours and hours" ...