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Thank you for your suggestions. The previous chapter would answer all your questions. It would make more sense if you had read it. Thanks for the review!

Hello and thank you for the review. The scar in Eon's face will be explained in the next chapter. This hasn't been edited yet but I ll consider your suggestions ...

Thank you so much for the lovely review! You are right about the name the truth is I hadn't yet figured how to name my main character when I started ...

I need to edit this for sure since that's only the first draft. Thank you however for your suggestions I will surely consider them!

Thank you so much for the review!! I will take your suggestions under account when I edit this. I m glad you liked it!!!

Thank you so much for the review!

Thank you so much! I m glad you liked it.

Thank you for the review! :) And yes there were stanzas...thank you for the tip, this is really helpful I had no idea

Thank you :)

Thanks a lot, I m happy to hear that you liked it, I will edit it soon you are right about the paragraphs.

Thank you very much for the review. I know it's kind of complicated but there is more into it and I shall expand on that story so you ll get ...

This is an honest piece of work and literature at any form oughts to be first and foremost honest and true. I like the fact that you use simple everyday ...