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  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Gertrude Paulsen's Last Wish

    I like the very strong plotline, you don't hesitate at all moving from one point to the next. Which is good for a short story. I feel like you sometimes ...

    Apr 1, 2020
  • Poetry » Politics, Dramatic Re: Monkey in the Fire

    I had that too. So I just put a dash between the lines to keep the spaces. You can see it in my latest poem.

    Mar 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: The feather

    idk why but i just really like the use of the word plumage. great word choice.

    Mar 30, 2020


You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling