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  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Gertrude Paulsen's Last Wish

    I like the very strong plotline, you don't hesitate at all moving from one point to the next. Which is good for a short story. I feel like you sometimes ...

    Wed Apr 01, 2020 7:24 pm
  • Poetry » Politics, Dramatic Re: Monkey in the Fire

    I had that too. So I just put a dash between the lines to keep the spaces. You can see it in my latest poem.

    Mon Mar 30, 2020 5:01 am
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: The feather

    idk why but i just really like the use of the word plumage. great word choice.

    Mon Mar 30, 2020 2:17 am


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