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*This is just a short story I decided to write. Its not exactly a romance, its more about have love for life or not having life at all. Enjoy, and ...

I like the idea of the repetition but it seems almost too sudden. I would say maybe try and add something in between the changing moods. And the parallel to ...

Thank you for the review! Its my first one :D Yeah, my lyrics often come out more like poetry than lyrics and I don't usually do choruses, but I think ...

One, three, and six are my favorites but they are all lovely! I love nature pictures, I really like the way you capture the light and are able to focus ...

I can for sure tell who it is! Its pretty good, I can never get my portraits to look very much like the real person, its a hard thing to ...

Hey, thanks for all the rules and warm welcomes. Okay let me think, My favorite color is blue. My hobbies are reading, writing, acting, guitar, violin, and soccer. I looove ...

I really like this, I like the rhyme scheme, it flows well. My only problem was this verse; ok so this is the lyrics i made up after a song ...

December shivers [x3] Crawl down your back and the fever sinks into your soul Takes hold, shows you the truth as your mind floats through the frosted air. The body ...

I really like that you are doing this from both a male and female perspective, I applaud you for that. Its not easy to write from the opposite sex's point ...

Hello, I really enjoyed this. It was great, really makes you think. The first two stanzas flow really well, but I found that when you get to the third one, ...

I'm not even halfway through yet, but I like it :D P.S. I'm bored, shall we chat?

I've read a lot about Anne Boleyn because I find her to be a fascinating, strong, and empowering woman :D Anyways, so I know quite a lot about her and ...

As can always be expected the book was better than the movie, but I still loved the movie. It was funny and I reallly like the soundtrack. Another perk being ...

Hello all, I am, obviously, new. And, again obviously, interested in writing. I plan on majoring in creative writing and then hopefully publishing some of my works.