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A few of the lines in this poem had an unclear meaning to me. Otherwise, your description was very good. Also, I liked the beat of this poem. Very nice ...

Till alas, it was. Soon the colour came back to dance upon her face, never to leave again. Amazing ending by far. "To never leave again" makes me realize that ...

Being drunk, in my opinion, is a mental state where you just act the way you want to without any second thoughts. Most people, including myself, just do whatever comes ...

I have my own set of beliefs but in a generic way, I am a christian. I do believe in what the bible says. I, however, believe that the prophets ...

#5 is my favorite of all of them. the vertical angle shows the trees (or plants) along with a big portion of the sky still showing. and your cake, looks ...

Give me your views and please rate 1-10 (ten being the best). Thank you

Yeah I wasn't sure if I should keep it or not because it's sort of photography but yet again isn't. So thank you :]

i really like the old english feel to your vocabulary; its a nice touch to the poem. also your metaphors and similes are amazing. you'll definetly go far. And the ...

I want to live where I’m not confined by common boundaries; Ill be no longer confined by the laws of money and politicians. I want to live where my front ...

:] please just tell me what you think about this picture my best friend took a few days ago. its simply me with my hands above me sort of in ...