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Re: Jackie's Story (Temp. Title)
Thank you for reviewing this! I will definitely clean the organization up.
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: Jackie's Story (Temp. Title)
Seriously, anyone want to review this???
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 1
I would really like to see some more detail in setting. I feel like half the chapter is missing. More detail, especially in the first paragraph would be magnificent.
Jul 8, 2009