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Hey, Pink! Good storyline, it really makes you want to read more and more. For me, it was a bit like Twilight- having the mysterious, beautiful, strange boy of whom ...

Hi! Nice story, interesting turn when the girl wakes up as an actual woman. Spelling was generally OK, except for a few "to" instead of "too" and stuff like that, ...

Author's Note: I forgot to mention it in the first chapter, but this is the first draft. Critiquing is very much appreciated. :] Also, this is essentially a flashback (except ...