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Re: Dear Dad
heyy... this poem for me.. in the beginning was good.. but towards the middle i kinda got less interested.. and stopped reading it for a bit then decided to see ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: In My Dreams
i love your poem!!!!!! i dont know anyway to improve it.... keep writing!!!!!! ~klemieux51
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Something
i like your poem.. i can picture this image in my mind of you reading it tro me the first time you read it to me in class... and i ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Too late
i like the poem.. but the only thing is, i would add more and express how u feel more, anddon't jump from u to him to u... let your voice ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Your Lies
i think this is a really good poem, and i think that it really goes good together keep writting ~klemieux51 :)
May 28, 2011 -
Re: how do you know?
How do you know how he feels? How do you know it’s real? How do you know it’s going to work? How do you know when to be scared or ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Mothers Day
i am tyrying to be helpgful, not mean diserve is spelled wrong you spell it like this: deserve.... but i like your poem...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: You
Powerful but Calm Strong and fearless Spiritual and social Graceful and flawless, Like a butterfly You Yourself, the person I call me The person that knows you inside and out... ...
May 19, 2011
