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Re: Coffee
Coffee is my addiction, so these poems were definitely amusing to me. Thanks for the laugh. :)
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Math...mwahahahah
This poem was great. Even though I'm kinda good at math, I still hate it. So I can empathize. I have nothing bad to say about this poem. You kept ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Sin
I'd just like to start off with, "Wow!" This poem is amazing. You keep the rhyme scheme consistent. There's nothing wrong with writing during church. Some of my most amazing ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Savior
It's short and sweet, like all cinquains, but you really touch the heart kinda. At least it touched my heart.
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Ducks
This poem was meant as a joke and a cure for a bad case of boredom. The only reason it's posted at all is because people got a kick out ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Tainted Blood Ch.2
Great, great writing. I think that you should consider italics instead of underlining words. But other than that,it's awesome. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Concrete
It's just a baby poem, please don't kill it. :) The glow of the moon calls to me Like no other thing. I contemplate escape But there is no escaping ...
Jun 14, 2011
