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oh man!!! i really wanted to read that chapter lol... this story is great! I love it. lol it was funny when she saw that his zipper was undone lol. ...

Chapter 3- Brave I didn’t hear the voice for the rest of the day. Maybe I had been imagining it after all. It wouldn’t be the first time I had ...

Hi. I really enjoyed this. I have to agree with KnightlyAngel. You could clean it up a little bit. But it is promising... keep up the good work.

Hey. I started seriously writing when I was nine. I was in grade six and we had to write a SHORT story for assesment. Mine turned out to be like ...

hey.. this was really good. i'm not much of a poet myself. I just write stories. this is really really good.... i love it... i get why she is running ...

Chapter 2- Voices in the Dark It was three later that I heard the first voice in the dark, calling my name so softly that it could have been a ...

Hey. thanks for reviewing guys. It really means alot. :D LaReine; thank you for picking up on all the grammar mistakes and all that. I don't really bother much when ...

This is awesome. I'm not actually a poet myself. I'm more of a story writer but sometimes when I'm feeling down I write some poems to express myself. This is ...

I think this is a good story, but you could add a little more description into it. I have to agree with Radid... does she think that killing the guy ...

Chapter One – Witness Kalaen Warterton died in a fatal car crash on July 13th, 2003. It was a dark night, extremely cold. Rain poured down on the streets of ...

My Guardian Angel Prologue He meant nothing to me. Nothing at all. And now, he is everything... He is my secret keeper, my loyal companion, my bodyguard, my saviour, my ...

Thanks so much for your critique... its really helped a lot..i haven't actually edited it yet cause i usually wait until i've finished the whole story to do that.... but ...

Thanks everyone for all your critiques... right now I'm not going to edit them because I like to edit my stories once I have finished them. I just find that ...

Chapter 2- Bad News The next day was exactly the same as the previous day. Tyler caught up with us before school and tried again to try and coax me ...

This is fairly good. It is a little hard to read without indents (new lines for dialogue) so I would suggest that you fix that up if you want anyone ...