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To Rosa it felt totally surreal how they were suspended hundreds of feet above the clouds, how time seemed held fast by a leash, how her world had become a ...

This was nice ^_^ Reminds me a bit of the magic realism I've read for my Spanish classes - the kind of stories where the surreal blends with the real, ...

Hmmmm First off, I really liked the discourse on calculus and physics in the last stanza. It said 'Aha!' in my head. It clicked. As for the rest of the ...

I dunno if this goes here, but since it's research-y... I'm looking for a poem that appeared on December's SAT II Literature Test. It's about how the key to poetry ...

The rhyming inconsistency weakens your poem. I have to agree with Snoink that the "broad light" verse doesn't add much - maybe you can include the concept of brilliance with ...

[pre]The descent of my standards can only be measured in negative centigrades leading to the infinite. Or in rocks in my pockets. Or in fathoms of water below. Or in ...

This is interesting, even if it may need some work. It's like you're still in the process of reeling in a thought. I think it's good that a poem has ...