kitkatqt16

Hey sister! Wow! Wonderful job! I like how this poem flows. I'm sorry you had to get caught in Keaton's web, but he does not deserve you! Lol! Overall I ...

The waves lap upon the shore, the cool soft breeze carries the smell of salt water. I stand where the land meets the ocean. The water like thousands of hands, ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this poem! It feels like I am honestly inside your head. I think this is one of the best poems I have read in a long ...

I know what you mean about people judging you! It's rude and immature! One of the guys I know is bisexual, everyone teases him and makes him feel worthless. People ...

I really enjoyed this! Well done! You used a lot of discriptive words! I honestly feel as if I'm in your thoughts! You are very talented! Keep up the good ...

Wonderful job! Very intriguing!

Hello! It overall was interesting. It just needs a little more detail. Keep writng! You really have a gift for captivating readers!

I liked it. It just lacks some unique words. Other than that, well done!

I like it! The words are very straight forward and it has a lot of meaning! :smt003

This poem is very intriguing! It seriously gives me the chills when you say: Peer through my windows all throughthe night. To watch me sleep, to give me fright. Yikes! ...

Was I not enough? Did I do something wrong? You made me feel special, but that did not last long. You cheated and you lied. You made my heart a ...

I'm sitting on the grassy floor of the earth, the leaves above me slowly rustle. The earth is constantly changing, moving, growing, living. I look at the bright blue sky, ...