kimmybee

I like this poem. I like how it was like (this is how I saw it) a self introduction to YWS but at the same time a story. You are ...

There is this inexplicable joy That I get Each time I try to employ To or intelligently detect The feelings I have when I Speak or hear of You, I ...

I think this is a really nice story. This is my first reviewing a story, but the most evident flaw that I saw was the grammar use. I'll try not ...

GREAT JOB! :') I love the feel of serenity one gets from reading it. You could read it many times and the feeling would only grow. Put it on a ...

Simply amazing! I agree that this poem can be liken to a torch- we are the new generation of poets. A pretty exemplary poem if you ask me- a good ...

I believe the idea of the mirror's worth and the jewelries that everyone want or price is an exceptional one. I was however disappointed with how it was brought across ...

Why should I care to love her If she doesn't love me back? If she only gives me a quarter, Why should I, alone, fill the sack? Is friendship not ...

Haha! I loved this! This was very interesting to read :D Some things I noted: With each different section you managed to evoke a different reason in the reader and ...

Your poem seems a bit like a sketch. There's so much to it that I feel you wanted to express, but somewhere between your thoughts and the paper some imagery ...

Thanks briggsy1996 and samii27 :D Thank you so much for the reviews!!

Awesome story! Watch out for the typo errors though! Oh and wonderment isn't a word [I know it should be :) but it's not] Again, you've got some skills

I liked this, alot! The only problem I saw was the typo errors you had. Everything else was alright and quite interesting to read Keep writing!

You know something? Something happened the other day. I've found I've stopped sleeping. I could see; we are different, in so many ways. I makes me wonder how much longer ...