killkrusha69

This is dedicated to my favorite fantasy world: Warhammer 40k Many of you might not fully understand this story but bare with me here. I will add some definitions here ...

Yep basically agree with everything he said. I am not good in grammar but I didn’t see really bad mistakes. The story over all was 6/10 You had the action ...

I cant really say that their is anything wrong. Kept me interested the hole way. You really gave me a clear picture of this world.

Okay so I finished it. I am really hoping for more. I am pretty tired so I might not have noticed the grammar mistake, sorry about that. You nailed Israel’s ...

I will finish reading chapter 2 a bit later. I loved the action, really great. Only thing I would like to ask is that you would show a bit more ...

Of being stuck in morning, I think it will be better if you add ' the morning' Other wise loved it. It was really good, I like how you took ...

Holy crap! That was awesome. Your writing skills were really good. You pretty much explained how any person would feel if they are running from something scary. I felt it, ...

Okay, this is my first review. Perhaps I am being of extreme, but the ending killed it. Like literally killed the whole thing. The beginning was really good, I loved ...