killkrusha69

This world is defiantly new to my eyes and mind. It is still hard for me to process that places like these exist on this earth. I’ve seen photographs and ...

The idea of makeing these pictures was a good idea, but many of them seemed very blury to me.

First of all very good song and idea of the theme. It was interesting. Also you dont have to tell us if something is the "verse, chorus, ending" I tink ...

Only thing what bothered me in the lyrics was: When we first met (First met) I didn't even know your name yet (Name yet) Im sorry but the words met ...

Well..I must disagree with the people that didnt like this song because of the use of the "F" word...I mean sure its not a bright word, but seriously this isnt ...

I like the idea of the song but when I look into the lyrics I like to see the philosophical truth (in simple words theme) in them. I like how ...

I like the idea but I cant say that this is a complete lyric. I mean why so short? You presented a great idea but not what it holds. If ...

Thank you guys I will continue improveing my lyrics. Yes I had to bend the lyrics a bit to the music. Its just I see artists make the music usually ...

Melody is You can figure out how the song goes but it goes into the melody perfect. You know…Sometimes it seems there is no point in fighting. You are outnumbered, ...

I made even more changes :D

First of all its too short so it feels as you just began reading a book you been waiting for and it is only 3 pages long... In good lyrics, ...

so I liked the use of words you ha and you described the pain pretty well. The details that you went into were really good. So keep up the good ...

Wow very interesting, I haven’t read the other parts this just got me in so fast. I guess I need to begin reading the other parts.

It was pretty good. Just to let you know, that you do not have to add markings in the end since it’s a poem but it doesn’t matter. The rhymes ...

Interesting how you got all these differant characters. I guess I should get started reading your actual story.