killerchika

allowing her feet to lead her away from the crowd. I definately don't think that is too fancy as I have seen similar wording in other books and I never ...

Quote: Wilted flowers dangling lifelessly from their climbing roots, scorched vines were peeling off the crumbling buildings standing in a courtyard of ashes. Nice description but you change tenses in

Totally and completely pointless but I crack up every time I think about our mini play. Narrator: One day, Toothpaste met Toothbrush and they fell deeply in love. Toothpaste & ...

One It had been a glorious summer day. The grass, emerald as the jewel itself, grew high and tickled my knees as I stepped through it. Being four, I had ...

Hi I'm killerchika, I just joined here recently. I love to write very much. I'm mainly into Fantasy, but I also write some [crappy] realistic fiction. I've been working on ...

That was very imaginative, if not somewhat morbid. The writing was done very well. It would be nice if the spirit alleigence was explained, but other than that I quite ...