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Re: A Letter to Pedantic Americans
Haha I love this so much!
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: See No Evil, Hear No Evil, Feel No Evil
Wow... that was truly amazing! I love this so much. I can't review this because it's so amazing. This is the most amazng piece on Young Writer's Society that I've ...
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: What we used to be.
To be honest, this isn't good at all. I'm pretty sure you can do better. The beginning is weaker than Usher's voice when he tries to sing and dance at ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: What we used to be.
woah
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Teenage Girls
But i still love it!
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Teenage Girls
If you think that I am going to be passive about this, however You, my dear former friend, are sadly mistaken This sounds a bit awkward. I don't know the ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: To write Love On her Arms
Hey there! May I call you K for short? :smt001 Of course you can!!! :D YAY! I have a nickname now!! and thanks for the constructive critisism. I've been waiting ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Fresh Air
Fresh Air I suffocate from voices. Splashing the restful, struggling to glimpse the surface, I breathe fresh air. I love this part! BUt what is this entire poem about?
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: I Won't Give Up
I love it! Can you do another one, but a bit more dramatic? Like, with imagery and stuff. I think it would be SUPER EPIC! But I REALLY love this!
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: To write Love On her Arms
Thank you soo much! I appreciate it! And yes, I am going to celebrate it! I trust that you are as well?! :D LOVE IS NOW ON YOUR ARM!! :D
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: To write Love On her Arms
To Write Love on her arms is a beautiful thing. She feels that she is wanted, That she is needed. Like she is an important factor in someone's life. The ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Her Molten Core - Chapter 1 (16+)
WOW! this is amazing! you are amazing as well. But like most of these comments, I have some issues with some stuff on here... soooooo...... Let the Constructive Critisism begin ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Mouthbreather
Amazing! Just simply amazing! I love it, it was a WOW moment! *rounds of applause*
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Kenya's here!!
Hi there other yong writers! My name is Kenya! I am 100% Teenage Female! and I am trying to promote a writing career... and find myself as a person.. and ...
Oct 3, 2010 -
Re: Perfect kiss
I like it. The romance is gorgeous. The night sounds like it was a perfect night. But there are some things i feel could have been better. When I was ...
Oct 3, 2010
