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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Untitled 1

    Hi there JadeLotus. Thank you for requesting a review! I'm not sure how much I'll be able to go over, as you've already had quite a few reviews, but I ...

    Apr 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Lost Dragon 12.2

    Hey there soundo! Figured I would stop by and give you a second review on this. The only part I know of this is that I know a part of ...

    Apr 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Delta - 21.3

    Alright, here's another chapter to read. Couldn't get to this earlier, sorry, but hoping to review the next piece soon as well. The dilemma in the opening paragraph is an ...

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Delta - 21.2

    Hi again. Meant to get to this sooner, but I've been weird kinds of busy with stuff. I'm happy to have more of Jud's view here, as I think it's ...

    Mar 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: gratification is a privilege

    Hey, there manilla. Thanks for requesting a review. Hope this helps! (Also, this turned out way longer than I thought it would be, sorry!) This is interesting. The theme of ...

    Mar 23, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: simply blue

    I figured that I might as well type up a review for this because the image does appear correctly unlike the person below me, and I like talking about color, ...

    Mar 18, 2019
  • Script » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Thief That Stole Excalibur (Part 4)

    Hey there RavenBlack. Popping in to give this work of yours a second review to get it out of the Green Room. I don't have too much experience with scripts, ...

    Mar 13, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Delta - 21.1

    Well, here we go again, so yay. I am so down for some Jud perspective (don't remember if you did this before, I don't think so? But if so/not, either ...

    Mar 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Delta - 20.4

    Hello once again. Held off on reviewing this for a moment so there's less time to wait until the next chapter, whoop. I'm enjoying these chapter chunks of being able ...

    Mar 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Marble Lungs / Draft 03 / Ch. 1.2

    Popping back to give another review of this story. I think I spent a while getting my thoughts together because there was a significant change in Ethan, which I didn't ...

    Mar 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (16.2)

    Hi there mellifera! Figured I would review this chapter as well. Also, I'm hoping we'll eventually get to Carter in a somewhat safe position. Something I had really been looking ...

    Mar 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Sognore 2.0

    Hello Anamel. Popping by to boot this out of the Green Room and give you a second review. This has a very eerie tone, which I think fits the idea ...

    Mar 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (16.1)

    Hi again mellifera! Both happy and unhappy to be booting this out of the Green Room. One, I'm rather nervous for all of these characters and hope nothing worse happens ...

    Mar 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Wolf Eyes chapter 9 *rewrite*

    Hello TheMulticoloredCyr! I've read bits and pieces of this work of yours (both pre and current-version) but I haven't really reviewed any chapters. Since this has been in the Green ...

    Feb 27, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Failure

    Hello there silented1. Welcome back to the site. Hope you like the new changes. This is a curious poem to go over. On the one hand, the first four lines ...

    Feb 27, 2019


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