kevinxd18

The whole time through i was thinking why arent these people more freaked out by this? Then at the end i went "OOOOOOOOOOOH!!!" haha, nice work there. Very dark, and ...

Wow. Your attention to detail is amazing. I love how you described every little thing in the second part. However, i was a little confused. Do the first and second ...

i think this is a very interesting story. i like how its in the point of view of a wolf. I like the detail of the attack on the moose. ...

"This was my first mission, and I was an idiot." i laughed so hard at this. You have a good sense of being comedic and writing a story at the ...

i like your style of writing in this piece. You grabbed my attention the whole way through and at the end i was rather sad it was over. I like ...