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Re: Mistaken Vendetta Chapter 2
title is subject to change (title and chapter) tell me what you think review me without holding back Chapter 2 – rain drops I distinctly heard the sound of rain ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Mistaken Vendetta
Well, i wrote this a long time ago and felt unusually inspired tonight and finished my chapter 2. check it out.
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: randomness
so i typed this the other night out of sheer boredom, and i didnt even plan it out! how wonderful It was barely past noon, and I was already drinking. ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: craziest night of writing you have ever experienced?
thanks for moving =D im still getting used to all this
Aug 5, 2008 -
Re: craziest night of writing you have ever experienced?
Well my craziest night of writing was in may. Last school year in Language Arts we had a semester long writing project. (this is actually my starting point in writing ...
Aug 5, 2008 -
Re: All That's Left Of Him
The whole time through i was thinking why arent these people more freaked out by this? Then at the end i went "OOOOOOOOOOOH!!!" haha, nice work there. Very dark, and ...
Aug 5, 2008 -
Re: Four Eyes
Wow. Your attention to detail is amazing. I love how you described every little thing in the second part. However, i was a little confused. Do the first and second ...
Aug 5, 2008 -
Re: 'To Kill a Mockingbird'
To Kill a Mockingbird is easily one of my favorite books. I had to read it for school. It is a definite classic. I found myself being drawn into this ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: Try writing while half-asleep
I found that for myself and a few others, writing when one is very tired or "half asleep" can yield amazing outcomes. I remember a couple of times i would ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
I was searching from google for teen write sites and one of the matches had a link here and well here i am :o
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: Mistaken Vendetta
Thank you all for the wonderful feedback. I didnt even notice the whole "i heard the voice" even though the woman laughed. I kind of have a rough outline for ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: Mistaken Vendetta
ah sorry, didn't even see the rule page. I just immediately jumped in to submitting. Thanks for telling me.
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: wolf hunt
i think this is a very interesting story. i like how its in the point of view of a wolf. I like the detail of the attack on the moose. ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: Max Killer
"This was my first mission, and I was an idiot." i laughed so hard at this. You have a good sense of being comedic and writing a story at the ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: The Window
i like your style of writing in this piece. You grabbed my attention the whole way through and at the end i was rather sad it was over. I like ...
Jul 28, 2008
