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okay..I'm going to irritate. What's society? Besides, society itself does not put people to death, the death is just done in the name of society. The decision is made by ...

Personally, if I were in pain and had nothing left to live fore, I'd want to die. You could commit suicide I suppose. But suicide pays a price. Not only-in ...

Okay...I've spent my writing career complaining about the fact that people kick up stink if you use !? or ?! depending on which is 'right.' Then, I discovered something liberating...there's ...

i have a sister called anna. we call her anna panna and pom and stuff like that.

he! Character taking over your life? I don't actually do this with my characters in my first novel, probably because I started when I was 12. I do it with ...

And before you say: yes Kestral is meant to be spelt with an A! Please ignore! Chapter 1-Ship – 2328words Sunshine poured down through the roofs of the huge looming ...

it's good but a little un-likely...I don't know what's happened to the father...but if he's not there then it would be unlikely that a small girl would be able to ...

I don't know if this is supposed to be funny...but it is....what was it: "so dad, did they get the spinx?" "no, they only got the nose." !!!!!!!!!! That is ...

Here's the prologue of my new book...It's short but still! Please be critical! :) I suppose I should have always known that it would come to this. There was always ...

English isn't your first language? Wow! You put my writing to shame and It is my native language! every1 else seems to have done a grammer check...I won't bore you ...

Okay..this is my view on what youv'e written...which is actually really good: there's just some things I'd change! Prologue ~ Burned I was crying, [s]a small child of just seven ...