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Re: Mistakes
Hey there! I love the subject of this poem, I think it's something a lot of people feel. I have no quarrels with the content or the structure of your ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: Too Many Blank Spaces (Chapter One)
Hey Giselle97, This chapter really evoked strong emotions in me and I'd love to read more! I noticed a few errors but mostly just typos... "I layed on the same ...
Apr 29, 2013 -
Re: Vince N Slicer
Hey MissAva! I'm going to copy all of your text into my review and make changes there, but I'll do it line by line. Please don't be disheartened though! This ...
Apr 29, 2013 -
Re: Spellcaster's Flame - Chapter One
Hello WrittenSoul! First of all I love the imagery that you conjure at the start of your chapter, I was amused and shocked to discover that the characters were children ...
Apr 29, 2013