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Re: Stormy Blue Skies
neat poem :) i like how you compared the 2 different types of skys :)
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: My Broken Smile
My smile is not real anymore. I only smile when I am forced too, This has changed because you've broken my smile. This smile has been cracked and bruised, all ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: My Name
I like how the poem had the name thing going on through out the whole thing. Sometimes that is hard to do. And Sannah is an AWESOME name. My name ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: [deleted]
I really like this I could tell it came from the heart. But I would make sure I is capital. But over all I love the poem. :)
May 28, 2011 -
Re: The Girl Who Never Was.
I like this poem. it made me think of all the kids at my school who don't really say anything to anyone. This poem made me think of them. I ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
i love this is nothing i would have come up with :) GREAT idea my fav act is # 5 :)
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Chasing A Pearl
I really liked this. The tittle drew me in and i wanted to know more about this so I read it. It is to the point and as long as ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Tears
it was originally written like that but i forgot to add those in. And thank you for pointing that out
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Broken Promises
When you say you will always be there, and wont let anyone or anything else hurt me. Why did you say it? In the end you did! You made a ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: crushing me to pieces
that is really powerful.:
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Tears
A single cloud can wash away my tears. But when you left me, the rain did nothing, but stay there. The more tears i had the less the rain could ...
May 21, 2011
